Blog#20 Which one to choose?

At first when I knew we had to revise either essay 3 or 4, my initial choice was essay #3. Reasons being that I felt that the essay wasn't complete and I wanted to finish my visual concept of my special place. But when I was working on the last essay #4 something that has been a part of my life for long time now I had similar feelings but for this essay the emotions were stronger. Right after I posted the essay I found myself having thoughts of what to do next. I had more ideas, a few new concepts I felt I could touch upon to help the point of the essay clearer. So that's why I am gonna recreate THE ENTERTAIN ZONE. Hopefully the new birth of the essay will fulfill my expectation.